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I look into your eyes one time and i already feel a connection.
I talk to you one time and feel the perfection.
Everything was fine when it started out.
Things became tough and we started our doubts.
She stepped in and ruined it all.
You decided to take the fall.
I begged you not to go, i wanted you to stay.
But you told me you had to go anyway.
I cried to myself and screamed out the pain.
I was so tired of hearing her name.
The four letter word seemed like nothing to you.
Obviously there was nothing i could do.
And I blamed myself for all these things.
I needed to just go and do somethings.
One scar for your mistake and another for mine.
Maybe some more will fill up the extra time.
One night changed me completely.
The pain this time cut me deeply.
I couldn't breathe,or even speak.
The commitment was nothing for you to keep.
I have to admit that it hurt worse even later.
I apologize for not helping but to hate her.
The words you told me hurt the worst.
You are the only one to break this curse.
One last chance to take.
Lets runaway from all this pain and hate.
Lets think of all our memories and times.
Something tells me that we can make this all right.
So I'll catch my breath and hold it in.
I'm going to hope that this isn't
THE
END.
:iconxbeautifuldisasterxo:

Author's Comments

I wrote this because i was having some relationship problems.I got hurt really bad.3rd time by the same person.
But i still wont give up.For all the right reasons,it feels wrong..and for all the wrong reasons,it feels right.

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:iconsharebear9204:
I really like this. It was written beautifully. ^^
In the lines about not helping but to hate her. Thats how it is, you know. You don't want to blame Chelsea because you love Chelsea. The truth is though...Chelsea knew what she was doing, whether she meant it or not.
And, I agree...the four letter word means nothing to her.
There are people that love you a lot Ashley. :heart:
Your poem will continue in the beats of your heart. =]

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I feel wicked.
:iconxbeautifuldisasterxo:
thanks heather ^__^
you helped me alot XD
:hug:
:hug:

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:heart:I'll never need to see the sun again,
There's enough light in your eyes to light up our little world:heart:
:iconsharebear9204:
You're welcome. ^^
Thats what I'm here for. =]
:hug:
:glomp:

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I feel wicked.
:iconlipsxofxanxangelx82:
thats really good ashley i love it :hug: :hug: ... I LOVE YOU!

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I'm everywhere you want me to be,The last night you'll spend alone,I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go,I'm everything you need me to be
:iconxbeautifuldisasterxo:
thanks. i love you too! :hug:

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:heart:I'll never need to see the sun again,
There's enough light in your eyes to light up our little world:heart:
:iconlipsxofxanxangelx82:
your welcome :hug:

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I'm everywhere you want me to be,The last night you'll spend alone,I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go,I'm everything you need me to be

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